2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；词汇表达较丰富，学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，文中有些单词拼错了；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Nowadays, with the development of society and the advancement of technology,people's life become increasingly brilliant ,espacially comptuer. In our daily life , computer take up an important place and everything almost uses computer to accomplish. What's more, many people think some day people would be replaced by computers and robots.As far as i am concerned, computer would never replace human beings. There is no denying the fact that computer plays a vital part in our daily life whose influence we cannot afford to ignore.While, computer was invented by human beings. We must know that people invend computers, without people, computer also would not exist.Second, people's brains are the cleverest brain in the world, Nothing could surpass it.Third, people can multiply but computer cannot and the world is so fantastic because people make many moody.Because of people the world become wonderful. All in all, people would be never replaced by computers.Whatever clever robots are,they would always be invended and created by people.