英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 英语六级> 真题> 2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17424
要求:

题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays, with the development of society and the advancement of technology,people's life become increasingly brilliant,especially computer. In our daily life, computer take up an important place and everything almost uses computer to accomplish. What's more, many people think some day people would be replaced by computers and robots.As far as i am concerned, computer would never replace human beings. There is no denying the fact that computer plays a vital part in our daily life whose influence we cannot afford to ignore.However, computer was invented by human beings. We must know that people invent computers, without people, computer also would not exist.Second, people's brains are the most clever brain in the world, Nothing could surpass it.Third, people can multiply but computer cannot and the world is so fantastic because people make many moody.Because of people the world become wonderful. All in all, people would be never replaced by computers.Whatever clever robots are,they would always be invented and created by people.

会员评论0个评论)
仙乐
金币:20

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:91.5回忆冰烛

人气:69发布:2013-11-09

得分:88.0fish_encounter

人气:76发布:2013-06-12

得分:88.0Fancy的游乐园

人气:58发布:2013-12-12

得分:88.0小喵喵~

人气:71发布:2013-12-29

得分:87.5jimmy。

人气:49发布:2013-08-02