题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Nowadays, with the development of society and the advancement of technology,people's life become increasingly brilliant,especially computer. In our daily life, computer take up an important place and everything almost uses computer to accomplish. What's more, many people think some day people would be replaced by computers and robots.As far as i am concerned, computer would never replace human beings. There is no denying the fact that computer plays a vital part in our daily life whose influence we cannot afford to ignore.However, computer was invented by human beings. We must know that people invent computers, without people, computer also would not exist.Second, people's brains are the most clever brain in the world, Nothing could surpass it.Third, people can multiply but computer cannot and the world is so fantastic because people make many moody.Because of people the world become wonderful. All in all, people would be never replaced by computers.Whatever clever robots are,they would always be invented and created by people.