2013年5月16日雅思大作文真题:广告的副作用

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文中能使用多样的词汇表达，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

With the development of economical, more and more advertisements flushed into our common life. It is acknowledged that the adverting influence our life deeply and extensively. Including the good ones and the bad ones. The good ones make our life better and brighter. The urgly ones make us feel unbearable. Although we can not deny the influence on us, it is also hard to neglect its negative efforts. Firstly, We often fail to choose the most needed product which we wanted. When we went into the supermarket, the advertising product is often on the most conspicuous places, we often attracted by it and buy it to waste a lot of money than our expection. Such as, when we were watching the television series the same advertising arise several times in the 45 minutes which make everyone feel disturbing. Secondly, when we want to find some effective information on certain kind disease, so many hospitals were appeared on the querying list, the most important is that so many illegal hospitals are doing the advertising which make so many people lost their money and life. Thirdly, some advertising make people misunderstanding. Such as old acid spirit of toothpaste, which makes me consider it to be eaten in a long time. In conclusion, although many knowledge we can get from the advertising. Which has many negative effects on us. What we can do is just rejecting its bad effect and accepts its good ones.