作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Nanjin is in southeastern of China.its' capital is jiangsu and there are 5 million people.Nanjin is a great city with 2400 years history.It has ten dynasties were building there. Nanjin is extremely beautiful with many beautiful sights,such as the stone city.There are many modern factories and tall building.Believe it or not,Nanjin is worthing visiting.If you visit there,I think you will have a good time and you can learn something without lesson. It not only can opens up our eyes ,but also learn something ahout Chinese history.As a Chinese,it is necessary. I hope you can have a good time.
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