作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Dear American plan, I heard that you will come to China with your parents and you are spending time in China in Zhongqiu Festival.I am very pleased to tell you some customs and I am extremely proud because I am a Chinese. Zhongqiu Festival with long history.It is special.It has some symbols and beautiful stories.We are eating dinner with family. There are many activities in that day.We can eat moon cake and watch moon.What a nice day. I hope I can help you a lot.I wish you to spend a interesting day. Yours, Li Hua