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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8971
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分84.0分
评语:

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

With the rapid development of technology, there are less and less face to face communication between each others. No one can denying the fact that our ability of social communication is degenerating. Under this circumstance, most of the time, we choose to judge a person by the first sight instead of chatting and knowing one's thoughts, which is usually not credible. The reason why i insist on the viewpoint that we should never judge a person by their appearance is lie in the following two aspects. To begin with, you may make a false understanding to the others' conduct as you don't known the background of their behavior. Take joking for example, when you make a joke with someone who like joking, you may have fun.But if you make a joke with someone who don't like joking, you may receive a cold face instead of smiling. At this time, you can't say this man don't like you. It's just because different people have different manners. In addition, the appearance you have seen may cheat you for people is used to pretend to be kind to a stranger. To sum up, we should avoid judging a person rashly. Only by our further contact and serious analyzing can we give the rational judgement.

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