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简单句偏多，应增加从句使用；作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。
today is friday.in the evening i will visit grand and grandpa.tomorrow morning i will helping my father in the garden then i gpo the drama club.as a are lover,i often go to the art exhibitions whenever i have the chance.in the afternon i will attens the activity which is international culture exchange . it is good way to contract with people in the world .on sturday i will oreoare for the chinese exam .at night i will attend the concert.tghe biggest advantages of nurture my interest in traditional form of art.
