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great changes have been taken places in my hometown in recent years .my uncle was a shy person,but now he is confident and extrovert.lastw eek i went to taiwan with my paremts in order to get together with my elderly uncle who is staring his business in there.taiwan is a nice inland with a long history .it is kniwn for their hospitality and industry.we take the airplane to get to there .when we arried at the airport, it has already 9.00 clock.luclky,my unclue send his friend to pick us up .then by the car we directly into his graet house.i see many place of interest in there.