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Last week I went to Taiwan with my parents. We went there to visit my uncle who is my mother’s brother. We arrived there early in the morning by air. My uncle came to the airport to meet us. My uncle lives in Taibei. It is a big city. My uncle showed us around the island. We visited Riyuetan and Ali Mountain. They are very beautiful.The weather there is nice, the food is delicious and the people are friendly. I like Taiwan, and I hope I can go to visit my uncle as often as I want.