小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Good friends This is my good friend,Mr.Hua.We always play together.He love me very much,and I love him very much,too. One day,we play on the playground.We're play football,it's very very interesting,at last,I win.I'm very happy with him,he can made me very happy,he can give me a lot of very interesting thing. I love him very much.We always says:"Born the same year on the same day, but we die on the same day.”