小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；从句使用不足，建议增加长句和复杂句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Good friends This is my good friend,Mr.Hua.We always play together.He love me very much,and I love him very much,too. One day,we play on the playground.We're play football,it's very very interesting,at last,I win.I'm very happy with him,he can made me very happy,he can give me a lot of very interesting thing. I love him very much.We always says:"Born the same year on the same day, but we die on the same day.” We wants to be keepping good friends in all our's life.