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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(68):学生安全教育

发布时间:2015-01-29 14:49浏览次数:471
要求:
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
The First Lesson of the New Term, a TV program about how to protect oneself in times of emergency, is meant to provide school students with the knowledge on self-protection. It will help students in case of natural disasters such as earthquakes, fires, snowstorms or floods. Many examples show that enough knowledge about self-protection along with enough courage and willpower can help many survive.
The most recent example is from the earthquake in Sichuan Province in May of 2008. While thousands of school kids were killed by collapsed school buildings, all students from a middle school survived even without a single one being hurt. That’s because of their timely and orderly evacuations (撤离), which they had been drilled in every term.
It’s good to see this program is the most important activity of a national campaign to make students be aware of personal safety. Chinese Education Ministry has called on all schools nationwide to give lessons on self-protection knowledge in times of emergency every term.
[写作内容]
某中学生英文报就“学生安全教育”为主题举行英语征文活动。你阅读了上述文章后,准备给该报投稿,稿件内容要点包括:
1. 以约30个词概括以上短文内容。
2. 然后以约120个词谈谈你的观点,并包括以下要点:
(1)安全教育的重要性;
(2)举例说明中学生在日常安全方面应该注意的事项;
(3)呼吁中学生提高安全意识。
[写作要求]
1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
用户的作文(系统评分67.0分
评语:

若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉,注意排除文中的拼写错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;可以适当增加副词的使用。

用户练习作文:

thereis no dobut that people should take responsibility for education thier children to be learn the safety education.therefore, there is a claim that all yong parents need to know the safety educational so that they can better nurtuin their children .oersonally,i suppose the statement and i do think it is practical proposal. in our daily life,it is essential hat such course be provided and shared.in addition ,children try to do something to save energy,learning from the computer ,teachers and all kinds of pathways to avoid personal injury.soo the precayutions is the significant approach .facing the rise of nutural disaster,such as earthquakes fires snowstorms and floods. in conclusion,my personal point of view is that educational training courses should be encouraged.they promote the healthy development of a person master the measures taken in the response to the disaster. that is to say,this practical makes enligible person recognize the vitalto the emergency education

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