回复:Smith回复自己将于近日回国处理公司要事,不能前往,表示歉意。
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June 10 Mr wang : congration!I'm smith i received your invitation that i'm very happy but i'm so sorry because i need go back to my country during this time ,l ''ll go back about fifteen days, before i leave ,i need carry my baggage,need copy or print some documents,so i'm very busy,so,i can't take part in your family 's party i wish your family and you pleasure