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the classroom should be learn the knowledge about study,so it should be quite and comfortable so that children can study in pecceand quite.part of students bring the cell phone to the classroom so that we often hear ringing in here .we should behave well in the class.if so we may bulind our society and construction the harmonoys camous.some students send a messae in class in order that interrupt the classroom activities.it suggest all the students should turn off the cellphone in the nick of time or answeringb the phone .we ought to focus on study
