2.文章的开头和结尾已经给出。
句式变化较好;文中词汇表达多样性要加强,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
all the books are easy to understand .i think it is fashion to read books .besides ,if u found the book is too hardc to understand ,maybe u can asidefor a moment and chane the another book.by reading the bookwhich u are interested in and meanwhile it be supposed to good to u.some o the books run over while some of the books should be reading in detail.it is taking notes when u redaing.turn to the dictionary for help when u understanf the words or grammer and ask more question