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2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:58浏览次数:7198
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题目要求:

Today,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?

题目讲解:

报告类题目,难度不大,思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。

第一段:开头

第二段:原因——环境污染,健康问题,工作压力

第三段:解决——绿色科技+绿化,健康意识+运动设施,学会自我减压

第四段:结尾

用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
评语:

学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;作者应增加从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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(CNN)After four years and hundreds of thousands of deaths, Syrian President Bashar al-Assad denied using catastrophic barrel bombs in his country's civil war and said he's getting information on the U.S.-led efforts to fight ISIS through other nations. In an interview with BBC, al-Assad said his regime has been getting information indirectly from third parties about U.S.-led coalition sorties over Syria. "Sometimes, they convey a message, a general message, but there's nothing tactical," he told BBC. "There is no dialogue. There's, let's say, information, but not dialogue." Several Western countries have clamored for al-Assad to step down since 2011, when peaceful protests against his regime led to a violent government crackdown and, subsequently, a full-on civil war. But now, U.S. allies and the Syrian regime have a common enemy: ISIS, which is trying to solidify an Islamic state across swaths of Iraq and Syria. In the interview, al-Assad said Syria won't join the international coalition trying to "degrade and destroy" ISIS. "No, definitely we cannot and we don't have the will and we don't want, for one simple reason - because we cannot be in an alliance with countries which support terrorism," he told BBC.

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