雅思写作范文:空运蔬菜水果的利弊

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it is reported that about many air freight vegetabls and friuits went the city .ib big cities ,acroos china ,an increasing number of vegetables choose to carry by air.some cities even set up some air freight location to transport them the reasons why more and more vegetables choose to through air to transport them.first of all,some poor air cities in need for supply the citizens,most of the vegetables are been in vital to them.secondly,it is save time so that ensure the food to get to there on time. however,in order to benefit some poor ciuntries,the g needv to get prepared on some strategy and measurements.in foreign countries, it have reached advance level.