雅思写作范文:父母应该多陪孩子

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in today,fast paced world,people live under great pressure from work , and relationship.various negative moods resulting from these presssure do harm to parents which spend less time with their children,now more and more people have realized the vital of keeping a good realtionship with their children keping a good realtionship can help children to have a happy and healthy growth .it is well know that nagative feeling and emotions have a bad influence on children,d health.for example,if children is inclined to get angry and easily and can,t get along well with others ,he or she likely to lack of parents,s care .in addition,children tend to sudy well when their parents always talk to them so that they know their parents love them and care for their study and life.they get along more easily with people around them and are more easily likely to get support and cooperation in their study. the importance of keeping a good realtionship is evident.people are more like ly to talk with u and to succed in their life. in my opinion,spend time with u chikdren and often talk to them is not just the parents,s responsibliity.all the parents should work together to ensure a happy and healthy environment for their chilred