高一英语作文模拟题:关于汽车

文中学术词汇表达比较恰当，但单词拼写不够认真；文中如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

now the whole world has rocognized the car which are considered as the major convenient transportation means for everyone.consequently,more and more individuals start to adapt to buy a car. some citizen support that the car is convenient faster and comfortable .they hold that it reflect the society development and the civil living level improved.the country become richer and richer.they also list the advantages in terms of driving the development of other industry. on the contrary,other peole are concerned that if the will produce pollution,impose of a heaven pollution burden to the air.furthermore, if our cirt have more cars lead to traffic jams .parking can have a big problem for people who have own his car.