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now the whole world has recognized the vital of celebrate the mid autumn festival which are consider as the major festival in china .consequently,more and more individuals have a joy with their family menbers spent on their time with their families. it has long history of china . it is unique festival for chinese p.it stands family menber get together to have fun.on that day , p often eat moon cakes and enjoy the moon.all pople should be encouraged to live a happy life with this festival .