2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达灵活性要提高，希望能较熟练地使用学术词汇；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

With the development of science,computer is familiar to us step by step.Is that good or bad for us? In my opinion,first of all,the invention of computer makes great profit for us in many walks of life,which we can't ignore.In addition,to ordinary people,we are able to know the world as soon as possible every day on the Internet and enjoy life through surfing the Internet. However,as we know,every coin has two sides.The disadvantage of the computer is also obvious.We cannot ignore that many children,even some of the adults are addicted to the computer games,which is bad for their health. In all,the invention of computer marked the progress human acquired,and in return,good for us.