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字数：300 满分：100分
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
As a college student,it is essential for us to spend money wisely. In daily life,we tend to buy cheap goods in order to earn money,I think it is totally right. Some people think this may not make us smart consumer,I think it is a subjective opinion. On one hand,as a student,the most important task is learning.What we spend is from our parents,so we have to spend it wisely.Every month,my parents send me 1000 yuan, it is not efficient for a comfortable life.So I have to make a plan for it,which can help me to have a good habit of spending money. I often look for group-buy deals with my roommates and buy cheap clothes .Meanwhile,I am not ashamed of it.On the other hand,such kind of behavior could help us to have competence to spend money wisely and decrease our parents' financial stress. My parents earn about 3000 yuan a month, they give me 1000 yuan and the left is just enough for family's daily life. What's more,it is difficult to earn money.But in my university,many students spend a marvelous quantity of money buying a cell phone or a beautiful bag,they don't know how to earn mony,but knowing how to spend money quickly.And it is also harmful to their future. In conclusion,I think a smart consumer should not be determined by some persons' opinions.Students have their own thoughts and ways to spend money. We should not criticize easily.
