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题目要求：
Higher education can be funded in several ways including the following three:
1. All costs are paid by the government.
2. All costs are paid by the student.
3. All costs are paid by the student using loans from the government that must be repaid after graduation. Discuss the benefits of each option. Which is the best one?
题目讲解：
语料库：
1. the higher education = college education 高等教育
2. the students’ loans = educational loans 学生贷款
3. work one’s way through college 半工半读
4. apply for the scholarship 申请奖学金
5. potential risk of refusing to repaying the loans 拒绝还款的风险
6. impose much pressure upon a nation economically 增加了政府的经济压力
7. come from the remote rural areas
8. subsidize = sponsor = finance 资助
9. economic support 经济支持
10. finish college education 完成高等教育
11. resolve more pressing social issues 解决更加紧迫的民生问题
12. stimulate one’s study motivation under the pressure of …… 在压力下激发学习动力
13. cherish the learning opportunities 珍惜学习的机会
14. face the risk of dropping out of school 面对辍学的风险
15. embark on part-timers 做兼职工作
作者词汇基本功很好，但在学术词汇的积累上还要努力；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
As the rapid development of the science and technology, our lifestyle has changed a lot compared with that hundreds of years ago. Some people are afraid we are living a more complex life compared because of these inventions, they hope to live a simpler life without those technologies instead. But from my own prospective, it sounds like a little radicals, the reasons are as following. There is no doubt that it is a world full of new stuffs and inventions, we are all surrounded by these, for example, the smart phones, which have more functions such as MP3, camera and entertainments of all kinds, and now popular with us, the computer has changed the way we study, work, and life totally, the digital camera enables us to take a photo in high resolution, which is much more clear than ever before. In addition to those electric invention, such a big progress has been made on curing for the disease by the new technology, to be specific, we have handled out a variety of disease which seemed impossible to cure just ten years ago, like some serious cancers,reseulting in the expand of life span. What’s more, people can enjoy travelling more conveniently with the inventions of airplanes, trains, and cars, those transportations really also serve critical role in the property of the whole society by means of more fastness and convenience. Admittedly, not all the new technologies do good to us human beings. We are suffering a serious climate pollution, mainly resulting from the abuse of chemical agents, the sharply drcend of the number of trees and the unaware of the importance of climate. Also, as for people living in the metro city, it is obvious that there are only a few communications in the street for those young, who are looking at their smart phones all the way, it is really dangerous because they even take no care about the coming car,only addicted to the tinies in their hands. That is cons that technology brings us. In a nutshell, the technology really help a lot in making our life convenient,imagine what life will be without it? What we should concern is how to make properly to minimise the shorts
