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In recent years, all kinds of University Ranking Lists can be found on some educational websites, or newspapers. The ranking standards also vary. These lists have great influence on students. They are even becoming the only scale to evaluate the colleges and universities. People hold different views toward this phenomenon. Some believe that these lists help students a lot, especially for those who will choose their university. While some other people protest vigorously. In their points, the list is really ridiculous and harmful. As far as I am concerned, every coin has two sides. On one hand, University ranking does encourage the development and growth of colleges. Such growth-the grand libraries, splendid stadiums and fruitful academic achievements, has caught the attention of the world. We’re impressed by these signs of our education’s tour to the 21st century. On the other hand, we have to pay attention to an unexpected phenomenon that some people have ignored the objectivity of university ranking. In a word, we should inspire the advantages of university and abandon its disadvantages.
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