2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

文中词汇表达灵活多样，可是学术词汇使用较少；熟练使用了一些长难句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Today, with the development of our country, more and more opportunities are offered to the young people, especially the ones who had just graduated from school. But in large cities, it suffers more pressure than it can bear and the quality of life lived in the large city is decreasing so . The reasons of the quality of life is decreasing are the followings: Firstly, the air pollution is more heavily than small city. The population of the big city is so much that so many cars are on the road and the off-gas of cars made people feel sick. Secondly, people have to work longer hours to get a chance to promote, so that the time comparing with their families is less. Thirdly, the long time works make them energy exhaustion to do nothing except sleeping all the weekends. More and more person death from overwork which can be seen from Internet, especially young person. The solutions for this situation are the followings: the government should plant more green plants to make people feel better . And for ourselves, we should pay attention to the health which can Be done by joining a organization such as climing and swimmimgs. We should relive the pressure in a manner such as drinking with friends or singing loudly in KTV and so on. The company should do some measures to improve this situation such as building the gymnasium for the employee to exercise. In conclusion, although the qualities of life is decreasing, we should do what we can do to minimize it