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假设你是Peter, 你的笔友李华最近很不开心, 下面是你收到的他的电子邮件。请你根据他来信的内容写一封回信。针对他的问题, 谈谈你的看法, 同时提出一些帮助他解决问题的建议。
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your letter. I am really unhappy these days because I didn’t pass the English exam. I often find it hard to understand reading materials. I think maybe it’s because there are so many difficult words in them and I seldom read English after class. Besides, some materials are really boring for me.
What should I do? Can you give me some suggestions?
Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re unhappy now. ______________________________________
I hope what I said can help you.
Yours,
Peter
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；使用了简单的从句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Dear Li Hua, I’m sorry to hear that you’re unhappy now. As your friend,there are my advice. First at all,you should be more outgoing to talk with your teacher.I believe your teacher will be happy to help you. Then,you should be more hardworking than now.Do more work to prove your Enilsh.Iearn new words by looking up the dictionary.And read loud the text book.Remember that"No pain, no gain"! Finally,please believe yourself!You can do everything that you want to do!Fighting! I hope what I said can help you. Yours, Peter
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