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"Daily deals", "Final calls", "collective buying" , etc. Consumers must be familiar with those phrases when going shopping. Indeed, people's spending behave, especially pupils' ,has changed nowadays. In my sentiment, all this may not make us smart consumers. First of all, buying for cheap but not suitable. While such eye-catching words as "Instant discount" or "Season Festival" appear in regardless of supermarket or shopping mall, buying at least one thing is a must, as the majority, because it's a feel of losing money if you're not.For example, there are daily deals in kitchen tools in a shopping mall and you don't want to get a feel of being lag behind as a natural instinct of human, so you buy at least one such tool. And then merely putting aside at home or forgetting inch by inch. Having a such bad habit is a result of it. In the long term, you may buy plenty of useless things and squander lot of money. What's more, you may lose the clear mind to determine the worth of merchandise that whether you should buy it or not. Generally speaking, some peoples' poor financial management is due to the fact that they don't budget for what they are going to spend on and indeed such attractive deals affect our critical thinking. So out of control in the end is a apparently aftermath. All in all, collecting all kinds of coupons, looking for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel, buying no clothes unless in a sale seem a smart customers' behavior. Nevertheless, All this may not make us smart consumers owing to the fact that it just changes your critical thinking.