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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33583
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
评语:

词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;有效的运用了一些复杂句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

"Daily deals", "Final calls", "collective buying" , etc. Consumers must be familiar with those phrases when going shopping. Indeed, people's spending behave, especially pupils' ,has changed nowadays. In my sentiment, all this may not make us smart consumers. First of all, buying for cheap but not suitable. While such eye-catching words as "Instant discount" or "Season Festival" appear in regardless of supermarket or shopping mall, buying at least one thing is a must, as the majority, because it's a feel of losing money if you're not.For example, there are daily deals in kitchen tools in a shopping mall and you don't want to get a feel of being lag behind as a natural instinct of human, so you buy at least one such tool. And then merely putting aside at home or forgetting inch by inch. Having a such bad habit is a result of it. In the long term, you may buy plenty of useless things and squander lot of money. What's more, you may lose the clear mind to determine the worth of merchandise that whether you should buy it or not. Generally speaking, some peoples' poor financial management is due to the fact that they don't budget for what they are going to spend on and indeed such attractive deals affect our critical thinking. So out of control in the end is a apparently aftermath. All in all, collecting all kinds of coupons, looking for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel, buying no clothes unless in a sale seem a smart customers' behavior. Nevertheless, All this may not make us smart consumers owing to the fact that it just changes your critical thinking.

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