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The ImPortance Of Learning English Now more and more people dislike studying English.Learning English can help your conversation with foreign people.Without English we cannot travel,trade,eat and so on.So it is important for us to learn English. Some student always explain that English is the most difficult subject,but I know 'where there is a Will,there is a way.'this saying.First,we can keep a English diary.Using the English letter to record our life.Second,we can use thesoftware of English.What an interesting thing it is!Third,we should do English exercise.Though,the base of our English are not so good , we are able to make our English well.Come on!