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The ImPortance Of Learning English Now more and more people dislike studying English.Learning English can help you take conversation with foreigner.Without English we cannot travel,trade,eat and so on.So it is important for us to learn English. Some student always explain that English is the most difficult subject,but I know 'where there is a Will,there is a way'this saying.First,we can keep a diary in English.Using the English letter to record our life.Second,we can use the software of English.What an interesting thing it is!Third,we should do exercise about English.Though the base of our English are not so good,we are able to make our English well.Come on!