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应增加从句和复杂句的使用，注意部分有错误的句子；作者词汇量比较丰富，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活，但要避免出现拼写错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Nowadays, most people are likely to shopping on line and buy the good on sale for they suppose that it is a good way to save money and can to be a smart consumer. But in my opinion, I don't think it is a adaptable way. In daily life, it is a common appearance that people purchase a number of cheap commodities, but most of those are laied aside because many people find the majority ware are useless. Actually, people who prefer to buy the goods on sale are don't carefully consider whether they really need or not when they purchase. This consuming behavior can be ragrad as blindness consume.The smarter consumer should be a people who buy the indeed thing with good quailty,because one durable thing equal many inferior things and indirectly save money.This way is reasonal consume. In conclusion, the reasonal consume can help us to save money for a long time. A smart consumer who is know how to reasoningly spend the money and make the best of everything.
