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Human beings have made variety of technology breakthroughs and lots of devices have been invented, and all of those have facilitated our lives .In contrast, our living environment is getting worth. First of all,the habitats of many species are losing, although it is unknown exactly that how many species have been wiped out on earth since Industrial Revolution. Secondly, in many nations practical solutions like prohibition of trade in endangered animals and plants to protect wildlife do exist, but they can not be useful without enforcing legislation word-wide. Penalties for violation used to be to minimal to stop such destructive human activities as illegal hunting and deforestation and pollution. What is worth, those problem are so awkward that no government can address alone. Accordingly, some fear that if little or nothing is done to prevent the situation from getting worth, human beings might be doomed as well. Such is the view held by scientists who call for immediate action on environment protection. However, others believe (consider) that the case (situation) is not hopeless. And the good news is that there is an increasing awareness of great danger human beings are in .Further more, an agreement have been reached to improve the situation despite the fact that not enough (这里是名词) has been done in certain fields. Excessive logging, illegal hunting and out-of-control pollution continue in many corners of the world, whereas concerned government across world no longer turns a blind eye. Fortunately, it is universally acknowledged that unless effective measures are taken together at once, our road to doom is sure. In addition, we ought to (should) trust ourselves in meeting challenges although environment protection is a hard task to deal with.
