2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

With the development of science,computer is familiar to us step by step.Is that good or bad for us? In my opinion,first of all,the invention of computer makes great profit for us in many walks of life,which we can't ignore.In addition,to ordinary people,we are able to know the world as soon as possible every day on the Internet and enjoy life through surfing the Internet. However,as we know,every coin has two sides.It is obvious that computer has its disadvantage.We cannot ignore that many children,even some of the adults are addicted to the computer games,which is bad for their health.