高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

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Civilization behave In now, chinese people hasn't civilization behave. Most chinese people think civilization behave is not important in the life. So chinese people should improve civilization behave.This is very important for the chinese people.What calls for special at ten t ion is that people don't spit in the street.Because it is very bad ting.Such as people talk about very loud in public or people af ten give a bad name to everybody.This is very bad behave.I will conclude by saying everybody got out have civilization behave.Because china is very long civilization behave country.