作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;可增加从句和复杂句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Nowadays, Advertisement on television is the current way in our life,Because it is convenient and intuitive,People can see the advertisement on television at home intuitively,It becomes a trend in the future.But people hold different attitude towards this issue,Some people think that it is a major advantage of advertising,While others think that it is disadvantage,I provide the following reasons. People those in favor of the former opinion think it hat television advertising brings as benefits,It is convenient,It had changed the traditional way,It can cover wide range of living.People those in favor of latter opinion think that TV advertising even brings benifits,But it also brings problems,Firstly,The time of TV advertisements is too long,It would effect people's emotion while they concentrating the television program,Secondly,Some vulgar and nonstandard advertisements have a great influence on society.In addition,With the increasingly fierce advertising competition,Some advertisements maybe exist crisis of cheat. All in all,it mirrors of social progress,no matter,What the TV advertisement develop,It is the inevitable result of social development.