2009年6月英语四级作文真题:博物馆免费对外开放

文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

Nowadays, the increasing number of museums open to the public free of charge, in order to attract more visitors. And at the same time, the level of our life increasing people prefer to learn something in new. However, some people believe this activity may bring some trouble. First of all, the exhibits may get damaged more easily, in some extent.