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Nowadays, the increasing number of museums open to the public free of charge, in order to attract more visitors. And at the same time, the level of our life increasing people prefer to learn something in new. However, some people believe this activity may bring some troubles. First of all,the exhibits may get damaged more easily, in some extent. Then, in this case, the free admission of museums means that the number of visitors will increase considerably, which would bring the consequent that some of the visitors can't enjoy themselves to the full. To conclude firmly convinced that the museums are obliged to be opened for free in public. Besides, the government can pay more attention to the exhibits preserved, which can make more and more people who come from various countries for spreading our culture.