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2009年6月英语四级作文真题:博物馆免费对外开放

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:22浏览次数:6151
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题目 Free admission to museums
要求
1.越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么?
2.也会带来一些问题
3.你的看法?
字数:120 满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays, the increasing number of museums open to the public free of charge, in order to attract more visitors. And at the same time, the level of our life increasing people prefer to learn something in new. However, some people believe this activity may bring some troubles. First of all,the exhibits may get damaged more easily, in some extent. Then, in this case, the free admission of museums means that the number of visitors will increase considerably, which would bring the consequent that some of the visitors can't enjoy themselves to the full. To conclude firmly convinced that the museums are obliged to be opened for free in public. Besides, the government can pay more attention to the exhibits preserved, which can make more and more people who come from various countries for spreading our culture.

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