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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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There goes an old saying "it is very important that keep on maintaining trust between us", for which I can not agree more. Why is important for keep on maintaining trust between us? In our daily life, we must keep in touch with others when we attending school, or work, we may need the aids from our colleagues or classmates, or we want to complete a business by unit as one. At this moment, the trust among us is especially important, which refers to whether we can achieve the works. We will fail if we do not trust each other, and the strength can not be focus on the same way. There are ample examples to demonstrate the point. For example, in a company, several persons are constitude a team, they have the same object, the tasks are arranged to every one, each of them should work together, and can not ignore the trust among of them. The trust each other, and could do the best and make sucess eventurally. In conclusion, we need the trust in every corner.

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