小学英语一年级作文：Clocks

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there is a clock on my desk with different kinds of function..most of friends like it very much because it provides a timing function.i often put it on my desk and it can tell my time tell me the time.it give me an abundant resource of infomation in use it.o perfer to use it than cell phone to ringdown.because it has no radiation.