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there are many things i would do today.i will do the housework to help my mother.it is convenient for me to di it .with the devekopment of the technique, i can use a machine to assist me .providing us a useful tool to do it and then i wil do my homework .in my spare time , i could play tennis with my father.it enables me not only to improve my skill and let me master the life skill in order to based on the society.it doesgood to us .what a full day