小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

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there is a picture o the wall. it is my family photo.stand in a row was my father .besides him is my mother.the front is me,nest to me is my brother.she is beautiful.she has long black hair,two big black eyes and a red mouth.her noice is better.she is dood at singing. she is clever gril.she like reading books play gamesand chess. she is also nice to eyeryone.she often help me wheni in trouble.