小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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according to recent report, thee has been many dogs in the world . i like large dogs very much .more and more children and adults like to keep the dog in the home.the reasons for the popularity of chinese p keep the dod are easy to understand. fristly.china is becoming a important country in the world , so it has economic power to keep the dog. learing to how to clean up the room is signinicant .the increased interset for p to have a dog.we can learn the foreign culture to how to keep a gog.e have reason to believe that wil have power to do it