小学二年级英语作文:Our house

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nowadays it is common for yong people to have a house belong to them. so there is a brief that house is safe to us to live.and i think this argument is true to some extent. there are sitting room bathroom licten and a slient study in there.to staryt with i like my bedroom very much .the yong generatin like it very much . i think highly of it .howeever,in real life we can also see some people donmt like them very much. i pursue my own lifestyle and maintan my individuals .neverthless i only repressent a minort-ity of p.