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my holiday is nice and interesting.i brush house with my dad .we painted pink ,because pink is my favourite colour. i often get up early .after breakfast ,i help my mom with housework then i did my homehork. the home work very interesting so i can do it well . in the afternoon , i play the table tennis with my frind. in the evening i watch tv with parents and prepared for my sely for the nest day.