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江苏省盐城市初级中学2011届九年级上学期期末考试写作:与父母相处的问题

发布时间:2013-06-24 18:03浏览次数:2125
要求:
你将代表学校参加盐城市中学生英语演讲比赛,演讲的题目是“Learning to get along with our parents”。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,内容要点如下:


现象

经常跟父母发火,甚至几天不讲话

原因
1、父母过分关注分数
2、我们……

措施(不少于三点)
1、我们应该和父母沟通
2、我们……
3、我们……

要求:

1、表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;

2、必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当的发挥;
3、词数:100词左右(演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
4、不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is ‘Learning to get along with our parents’.
These days, most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents. ____________________
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    That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加从句使用,注意极个别句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Learning to get along with our parents Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is ‘Learning to get along with our parents’.These days, most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parent,Some students quarrel with their parents,and for several days they don't talk to their parents.There are some reasons about that . Firstly,most parents just care about their children's grace,and they ignore other things,such as what their children thinking or what they really need. secondly,parents often think about some things on their way,that most student can't agree with.We must do something to stop this.We should communicate with our parents friendly,just don't forget that parents are good for us.We also should think about what did I do and what should we do. Always remember that they are our parents ,they just want us to be a good man ,maybe sometimes they are in a diffident way that we can't accept. That’s all for my speech. Thank you!

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