4. 他工作认真,我们都喜欢他的课,他是我们的偶像。
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My New English Teacher We have a new English teacher. His name is Gao Qiang. He is from Nanjing and is 28 years old. He has short hair and big eyes. He is tall and wears glasses. It makes him look very clever. He likes listening to music and sports. He often plays basketball with us on Friday afternoon. He works hard, and we all like his lessons. He is our hero. This my new English teacher, we are good friends.