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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦94:年级家长会

发布时间:2014-12-31 15:40浏览次数:419
要求:
上周学校举行了初三年级家长会,家长、学生和老师进行了面对面的交流,尤芳芳代表同学们说出了困惑,表示了决心:
因为经常考试,她时常有些压力,有时感到心烦意乱;
作业多,没有时间…;不知如何平衡学习与玩耍.
老师告诉她放松的方法有很多:⑴多与父母或朋友交流,⑵……
现在她知道了时间的重要性,能按时交作业,已经取得很大的进步;
要求:
1、短文要包括列举的要点并且适当发挥。
2、语言通顺,意思连贯,书写规范。

3、词数100词以上,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。


Last week our school held a parents’ meeting. Parents, students and teachers sat together and talked a lot.You Fangfang says she has a lot of problems. She __________________________

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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

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Last week our school held a parents’ meeting.Parents,students and teachers sat together and talked a lot.You Fangfang says she has a lot of problems. she often suffers from stress and feels disturbed at times/ from time to time because of exams.she has a lot of /too much homework,so she doesn’t have time for her hobbies.She often doesn’t know how to keep a balance between work and play. Her teacher tells her there are many ways to relax: ⑴she can often communicate with/talk to her parents and friends, ⑵……Now she has known the importance of saving time/it’s important to save time, she hand in her homework on time and has made great progress in study.

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