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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦94:年级家长会

发布时间:2014-12-31 15:40浏览次数:419
要求:
上周学校举行了初三年级家长会,家长、学生和老师进行了面对面的交流,尤芳芳代表同学们说出了困惑,表示了决心:
因为经常考试,她时常有些压力,有时感到心烦意乱;
作业多,没有时间…;不知如何平衡学习与玩耍.
老师告诉她放松的方法有很多:⑴多与父母或朋友交流,⑵……
现在她知道了时间的重要性,能按时交作业,已经取得很大的进步;
要求:
1、短文要包括列举的要点并且适当发挥。
2、语言通顺,意思连贯,书写规范。

3、词数100词以上,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。


Last week our school held a parents’ meeting. Parents, students and teachers sat together and talked a lot.You Fangfang says she has a lot of problems. She __________________________

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作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些学术词汇;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Last week our school held a parents’ meeting.Parents,students and teachers sat together and talked a lot. Fangfang says she has a lot of problems. she often suffers from stress and feels disturbed at times, from time to time because of exams.she has a lot of homework,so she doesn’t have time to pricate her hobbies.She often have no idea between work and play. Her teacher tells her there are many ways to relax: ⑴she can often communicate with her parents and friends, ⑵……Now she has known the importance of saving time she hand in her homework on time and has made great progress in study. Now, she kowns the importance of the study, she can always use her time good.

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