2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Fiona is my friend who comes from USA. She will come to visit my hometown Siyi next weekend. I'll take her to see some interesting places of my hometown: 1. Siyi Mountain: Siyi mountain is a famous mountain of my hometown, there are too much fruit(orange, persimmon,etc), so we can taste them on the mountain; And we also can see beauitful scenery on the mountain; 2. Longmiao River: Longmiao River is a small river and it flows around of my hometown, it is very beautiful: the water in the river is very clear, the fish in the river is very big. We can swimming in the river or go fishing; This is my plan, that's all.