参考词汇:
故宫 ― the Forbidden City
文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。
Long time no see to you.your brother go out for home .i hope stay for my home。IM wound like to go to the the Great Wall,Beihai Park and my school ,the Summer Palace,the Forbidden City shopping or other in one day。 You can come to meet me at the airport。