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It's invisible to draw a conclusion after what you see and hear Everyone might think that things what we see and hear by ourselves must be true.And we always deeply believe it.However,I don't think so.I suppose that it's invisible to draw a conclusion after what we see and hear. In my opinion, sometimes things what you see and hear also may be not true .On the one hand,it may be someone do it deliberately to cheat you.On the other hand, although the thing is true,but someone may be forced.Hence, we should still investigate after we draw a conclusion. Therefore,from now on,we can draw a conlusion until we investigate it carefully,not only by our eyes and ears.
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